Monday, 23 January 2012

Cleaning my closet .

If the title reminded you of the EMINEM song *hi5* but  no my post has nothing to do with it whatsoever . :P I'm vague like that >_<
Today I happened to clean out my closet where I keep old diaries ,  scrap books and old gifts etc etc , I found a spectacular blue colored book with my adolescent poems in them :O
Yeah apparently I wrote love poems when I was 12-15 ( Yeah I'm trying to act all cool now , but I know exactly who it was for also :P )
But the point is that as cheesy as they are and as stupid as I feel after reading them , it wasn't all that bad for a 13-14 year old :D So have a good laugh ( or not )

 CONFUSED INSIDE 

 My knees start to shake 
When you are in sight 
My mind is filled with wonder 
My heart with fright

When will the feeling stop ?
When did it start?
How can I listen to my mind 
Without breaking my heart

 I'm so confused 
What should I do ?
I can't think of anything 
Apart from you.

 Should I ignore you 
Or just give it time 
I can't think straight 
My heart controls my mind

 Bottled up inside 
Are the things I never said 
The feelings that I hide 
The lines you never read.

 You can see it in my eyes
Read it on my face
Trapped behind the lies
Is that I'm confused inside 

 With memories that linger 
& just don't fade away
Why can't I be happier 
Today is a brand new day

 It surprises me as to how
You mean so much to me
You bring a smile on my face
In every moment free
If you could just see
That we were meant to be
It may seem like nothing to you
But you are everything to me
- BluBluBling  
Yes this is written by me , yes I can rhyme :) , I choose not to cause then ^ this happens :P Not bad huh ?
I want to be in this kind of innocent love again =) . The absolutely trusting , silly and hurtless love . No promises and no mind games O:)

Ps: This was the least cheesiest so you can imagine the rest . Do not ask me to share them please .



This picture is clicked by Aakanksha Pathak , the first time I saw it I thought about young love , hence its here =) You can see more of her pictures here
This is about..

18 comments:

  1. Kapil Sharma24 January 2012 at 03:23

    t surprises me as to how
    You mean so much to me
    You bring a smile on my face
    In every moment free
    If you could just see
    That we were meant to be
    It may seem like nothing to you
    But you are everything to me...WOWED

    Amazing flow...wonderful words...Kudos

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    1. Nirali Naik25 January 2012 at 19:31

      Thankyou so much :D nice name you have there :) what does it mean ?

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  2. Misterio Vida24 January 2012 at 10:45

    ahan... and i am 28 and i feel like still this poem holds true in my case :P

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  3. D24 January 2012 at 11:57

    Amazing poem !
    Dee...

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  4. Purvi24 January 2012 at 12:44

    I don't think it is cheesy..does that make me a fool at heart????
    anyways very well written :) :)

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    1. Nirali Naik25 January 2012 at 19:33

      you don't :P :o , in that case i'll send you the rest . They are so lame :P

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  5. Ananya24 January 2012 at 16:09

    Hi BluBluBling (whats your name girl? :) ) , firstly, thank you for visiting my blog! :P and good for you that you can rhyme, because trust me, I dont think this is uber coincidence, but I had written some poems in that same age bracket of yours and when I read them now, I find them as the scariest and ugliest stuff written in the poetic history :/ I am always horrible with poems (sob sob).. and second coincidence I have with you is that these days am too on a decluttering mission.. anyway.. cute blog you have here.. enjoyed surfing through :)
    Blessed Be..
    Love,
    Ananya

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    1. Nirali Naik25 January 2012 at 19:35

      hahah :D my name is nirali :) Don't tell anyone :P All girls wrote poems at some age , some land some don't . This one was the only presentable one from my large collection and i feel even this is lame , i'm actually surprised so many people like it .

      Thank you for finding my blog cute :)
      PS : i love your name , ananya :)

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  6. Tanvi24 January 2012 at 21:36

    Awwww! How sweet! :) Also love the image!!!

    ♡ from © tanvii.com

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    1. Nirali Naik25 January 2012 at 21:47

      Eeep tanvi :D thank you for dropping by . I love your blog :D *does the I'm your fan wave* :P

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  7. Arundhati25 January 2012 at 12:08

    Its hard not to like the young, selfless and innocent love. Its hard not to fall in love that way.

    Liked the poem. :)

    http://inthepourinrain.blogspot.com/

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  8. --25 January 2012 at 12:57

    This is LOVELY writing!! I just stopped by to say hi and thank you for following my blog :-) I see that Israr is here! Did you know that he is a poet too?? ;)

    Best wishes, Fiona :-)

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    1. Nirali Naik25 January 2012 at 19:38

      Thank you :D , no i didn't know it , will go check it out soon :D

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  9. Misterio Vida26 January 2012 at 09:39

    @Fiona... you followed me here too? :P now everybody thinks that israr is a poet and when they find what "standard" poetry i do, they feel like throwing rotten tomatoes on me :P

    @Nirali...
    but i can guarantee you one thing... Princess Fiona is a top class poetess and I don't think you will find too many like here in this age :)

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